Workshop Reflection - Joining the Conversation step #1

Workshop Reflection
Joining the Conversation Step #1

My group for the workshop was me, Dominica, and Brian.
We spent a lot of time on Dominica's and Brian's papers because we thought that we would have more time, so by the time we got to my paper, we had little time left. Dominica and Brian told me that in the introduction for my "play", I should include the Officers first names instead of their last names. They said that it was confusing to have their last names in the introduction and then have their first names throughout the play.
Changing the names of the characters was actually the most helpful peice of advice that I received. They said that I had done a good job on my paper, so they didn't give me that much advice on what to change.
There wasn't really any peice of advice that was least helpful because I only recieved that one peice of advice.
I plan to revise my paper in the following ways:
In my introduction, I plan to change the characters names to only their first names to make it easier to read. I also plan to read through my paper and edit some of the grammatical errors.