In your Writing History Response, you have more fully described your writing experiences. I still want to know more about how these experiences changed you as a writer and what you believe about writing (beyond why it is important).
In your Exploratory Essay, you removed a significant amount of content to add clarity. I still wanted to see you ask more questions.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you revised sentences to add clarity and formality. You still need to work on analyzing instead of summarizing. You also need to add quotes.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you have revised for clarity and added examples. You are still short of the page length minimum.
Dear Rachel,
ReplyDeleteIn your Writing History Response, you have more fully described your writing experiences. I still want to know more about how these experiences changed you as a writer and what you believe about writing (beyond why it is important).
In your Exploratory Essay, you removed a significant amount of content to add clarity. I still wanted to see you ask more questions.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you revised sentences to add clarity and formality. You still need to work on analyzing instead of summarizing. You also need to add quotes.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you have revised for clarity and added examples. You are still short of the page length minimum.
Megan